Talk:Online Multiplayer/@comment-5337347-20130905084030

I'm sorry, but whoever wrote this... Although this particular wiki does not as of this time have a Manual of Style or any rules enforcing a particular writing style, such informal writing makes a wiki look unprofessional. Articles should be written in third person, avoiding words like "I" and "you". If information in an article is incorrect, and you KNOW it's incorrect, please edit it, rather than having a damn conversation on the page itself.

Avoid unnecessary information (such as the Twitter reference), or needless details or embellishment. We want information to be concise, and presented in a professional manner. An example of how not to do this is the "to form a quartet of adventurers for a single level!" part of the first paragraph of the Co-op section of the article. Additions such as this are completely unnecessary, and I believe the information is also incorrect.

We like to avoid telling players how to do things, instead giving a broad idea of the concept or situation, and letting players choose how to approach it themselves. An example: On a bosses page, instead of telling players to use a specific spell, such as Fireball, we would instead say that the boss has a weakness to fire.

For reference, you can read http://darksouls.wikia.com/wiki/Manual_of_Style; the Demon's Souls wiki editors are composed almost entirely of editors from the Dark Souls wiki, and as such, we follow essentially the same rules, so until we establish an official Manual of Style for this site, that will have to do.

With all that said, I'll finish editing this page at a later date.