Thread:Pericrotch/@comment-25155781-20150403010944

I see you've added a lot of valuable stuff to the wiki, so I'd like to personally thank you. Dedicated editors are hard to come by, for Demon's Souls at least.

Before you get too involved, though, remember that we're trying to go for maximum objectivity with our articles here. That's where your edits on the Imperial Spy page runs into some issues. It currently reads a lot like a walkthrough, describing specific actions for the player to take when dealing with that enemy. The thing is, logically, if we were to make that kind of article sufficiently objective, we would have to describe every possible strategy for every possible way to play the game. You'll understand, there's just not enough time in the day to do that.

Instead, only add information that could help any possible strategy, and that can be backed up by data taken from playing the game directly. For example, the Dirty Colossus page doesn't tell the reader exactly what to do in order to kill him, but does say how he attacks and what types of damage he's particularly vulnerable to.

As a footnote, be sure you check your edits for grammar and spelling errors. We want to be a bastion for free, quality information; we don't want our stuff to be hard to read.

Happy editing, friend. 